Story Pillars Outline Review + 1-Hour Coaching Session
Get your outline expertly analysed before we meet, then work directly with me for a full hour to bulletproof your story's foundation.

What You're Getting:

Complete Outline Review: I'll do a deep-dive analysis of your outline using the Story Pillars Method, examining all 5 parts. I'll identify structural weaknesses, missing Pillars, and gaps that could derail your draft, and prepare detailed notes on everything.

1-Hour Coaching Call: We jump on a call where I walk you through my analysis, answer your questions, help you troubleshoot stuck sections, and work with you to develop solutions. So you're not just getting feedback but we're solving your problems together in real time.

The result: You enter drafting with a battle-tested structure and absolute confidence that your story won't collapse during revision.
How it works: After purchase, you'll receive a submission link (any format, no page limits) and calendar link. Submit your outline, I'll review it thoroughly, then we'll meet live to transform it into something unshakeable.
This service is exclusively for writers using or applying the Story Pillars Method.
—Julian
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Justin

Epic-Fantasy Writer

"I had a strong story idea, but nowhere as strong as it is now that I have used Julian's Story Pillars Method. In the past, I tried writing my story using the 3-Act structure, and I'll be honest: I was pretty happy with Act 1. But eventually, the middle started to sag, and I couldn't figure out how to create an emotional payoff for the end (at least, not the way I envisioned it). That's when I discovered Julian. We started working together and it has completely transformed my story. Every little part of the middle felt intentional, and the ending... The ending, I'm just so happy! And I'm not even worried about revision anymore. If anything, I'm excited about revision! I know my story won't need endless revision to start querying and that's incredibly motivating."

Adel

Contemporary Writer

"Great coach! Very structured and organized. Julian makes you understand the global picture of writing, while giving you all the tools to go deep in your story and your characters. He is very clear in his explanations, very positive, and I enjoy working with him."

Ruslan

Fantasy Writer

"Julian is a great mentor. He is extremely knowledgeable, easy going and deeply caring. His perspective and insights into storytelling are most valuable for me. I benefit a lot from the Story Pillars Method and get new knowledge from every single lesson. Highly recommended!"